School uniforms should be abolished in all schools?
It is true that school uniforms make many students feel uncomfortable. While I admit that may right for some people, I trust that in another case, the uniforms are the best solution.
On the one hand, there is a diversity of reasons why students don’t like wearing uniforms. Firstly, uniforms prevent students from showing their personality. If students wear uniforms all of week, they look are similar and quite boring. Secondly, uniforms are expensive so not having to buy them will save money. A full set of uniform has many things: shirts, sport clothes, overcoats,… and maybe some families cannot afford it.
On the other hand, in some situation, uniforms are the wonderful key. It helps reduce the time students spend on choosing good clothes. Many schoolgirls, most of them are high school student usually take a lot of time to look beautiful before going out. When uniforms are the only choice, that time can be used more effective. Moreover, uniforms make students feel equal. It is inevitable that there is the gap between financial resources of students’ families. As the result, some of them will wear more costly clothes and bring about discrimination. Last but not least, uniforms also are a great idea to teach discipline.
In conclusion, it is certainly true that uniform should be rejected to make students’ individual stand out, but this is no mean best way for some schools in educate their pupils.
- Writing task 1: TABLE – Using phone 78
- The provided charts demonstrate how three kinds of nutrients are distributed in average, healthy and sport diets. 61
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- The given picture provides information on the way that paper and pulp are produced. 61
- The given chart demonstrates the proportion of Australian men and women in six different age groups in terms of how often they did exercises in 2010. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 390, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
...things: shirts, sport clothes, overcoats,… and maybe some families cannot afford i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1208.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0756302521 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73932824151 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626050420168 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3906833312 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.875 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8125 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244673721189 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755295437863 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685329717475 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164442351123 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437259877267 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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