happiness and money
In this modern age Money Talks. This has affected people’s priorities, displacing Family and Friends relationships. In this essay, I would agree that positive relationships are the secret for a happy a life. The analysis of rich and humble people way of life could support this argument.
Money is important to cover people’s basic needs. For instance, a health insurance, which cost a fee, is important in case of emergency. Definitely, Money can help people to overcome difficult situations. Broadly speaking, it is necessary to work hard and save some money to have a comfortable lifestyle.
However, not all rich People are happy. For instance, rich and famous of Hollywood such as Robin William, Whitney Houston, and Amy Wine House suffered from depression and even committed suicide. The real story is that they were alone. It shows that money cannot buy happiness.
In contrast, humble people who pay more attention to personal relationships could be happier. A Birthday celebration can illustrate this point. For humble people, what really matters is the company of their beloved, not having a fancy celebration or not. This makes clear that family and friends can brighten up anybody's lives.
All things considered, it seems that money is necessary to have a comfortable life, but is not enough to be happy. Surprisingly, the key to have a happy life could lie in personal relationships. The true is that money may not be forever, but family and real friends will always be there, in the good and bad moments of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, really, so, broadly speaking, for instance, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1062992126 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87172004094 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57874015748 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.3127034357 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.2631578947 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3684210526 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57894736842 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233566839266 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696612368202 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076342819636 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123448443209 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789742154533 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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