Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guide.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
People have a chance to choose different ways to travel and as the topic stats one of the popular ways is traveling in a group which has a tour leader. Besides, there are other ways of traveling. Like travel with family or friends and even travel alone. Each of these ways has their own advantages and maybe difficulties. In my view, depend on our situation we should give ourselves the opportunity to experience all of them at least for once during our lifetime.
The first way I’m going to discuss is Travel in a group. It has a lot of satisfying features for example, you have no difficulties finding different places in map or you don't put energy and time navigating. Furthermore, you don't worry to get lost and if you aren’t able to speak the language of that country, it won't have any negative effect in your travel. But the most important thing is that your travel timeline is fixed by a travel agency and it is takes the responsibility of hotel reservation, determining the places you should visit and so forth and you just should follow the group. Nevertheless, if you are an adventurous person, it’ll bring with it some pit falls and you’ll suffer from some aspects of travel in a group. The worst thing is that you are not decisive for your vacation activities and destinations. In fact you’ll miss the opportunity to spend more time on visiting places you would like to.
Second, you can travel with your immediate family or your closest friends. The more you like your fellow traveler, the more pleasant moments you'll experience and the less stress you’ll face. Although it may bring some challenges with it, for instance, finding addresses, reading map and being worried about the language of that country, but on the other hand it will be very enjoyable. There is a super tight connection between experiencing a relaxing travel and your relation whit people who accompany you. For many, their family and friends are those that they feel comfortable with. If they travel accompany them it'll help them to spend more time with them and certainly it’s a good way to make family relationship or friendship stronger and ultimately make more memorable moments.
The last and by far the best way is traveling alone. The beautiful, special thing about traveling solo is that it has a great feel of adventurous. Because your only rely on your decision, you have freedom to make any kind of second-split decision for your activities without asking someone else opinion. And you manage your travel just by yourself. You can take full advantages of your precious time because you’re not related to others and you don't have to visit some pleases that you are not interested in. in addition you don’t have to put others likes and dislikes first and that’s the most interesting thing about solo traveler. Furthermore you’ll have to face your weakness and it’ll make you brave.
In conclusion in my view travel with a group is only a type of traveling and of course not necessarily the best way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, at least, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, of course, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 29.0 13.8261648746 210% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 73.0 43.0788530466 169% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2547.0 1977.66487455 129% => OK
No of words: 521.0 407.700716846 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8886756238 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77759609229 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71588546044 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485604606526 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 791.1 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8225244757 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9615384615 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0384615385 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266668622268 0.236089414692 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0965808130772 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560281180743 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180918566036 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240799720007 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.