electricity in winter and summer
The two diagrams give figures for the England demanding on special days in winter and summer and where mostly they use this resource in English home.
It is clearly seen that nearly half of the electricity has used on heating rooms and heating water and there has been an identical pattern to lighting, TV, radio, vacuum cleaners, food mixers and electric tools (15%). While almost a quarter of heating room, and water (17.5%) are allocated to ovens, kettles and washing machine electricity consumption.
The pattern has been shows that the request for electricity during typical days in winter, and summers are different. There has been a dramatic increase in first hours during a day in summer with almost 40000 units of electricity at 2 A.M, after a moderate drop between 3 A.M and 9 A.M with 30000 units of electricity, there has been a gradual increase up to 112 with 40000 units of electricity during 12 to 18 P.M pattern level out in the 40000 units of electricity in a contract with summer at this time it was about 16000 units of electricity.
In winter season, it reached a peak of units and then there has been a sharp fall after 21 P.M.
The other pattern shows versus trend in summer. It is clearly seen that there is a negligible drop at first hours during a day up to 9 A.M, and it reached almost 12000 units of electricity. After a slight increase, it reached a peak amount at 13 P.M (20000 units of electricity).In contrast with winter, there has been a high amount of demand between 18 P.M and 21 P.M in summer there has been a level out trend during this time.
At all, this trend shows a different expenditure of electricity during a day.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 33.7804878049 166% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 965.302439024 141% => OK
No of words: 297.0 196.424390244 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59595959596 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53430476294 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 106.607317073 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.454545454545 0.547539520022 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 403.2 283.868780488 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.0892765436 43.030603864 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 151.666666667 112.824112599 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 22.9334400587 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318572678081 0.215688989381 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149414074974 0.103423049105 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0970002374378 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154725347139 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648010251822 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.2329268293 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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