It seems that nowadays TV has become an essential part of life. For some people, it is medium to spread news & awareness to others whereas for some others, it acts as a companion. What is your opinion on this? Support your point of view with details from your own experiences, observations or reading.
One of the most conspicuous trends in today's world is a colossal upsurge in use of Television. Many believe that TV is medium to make people aware of latest developments, while others believe it acts as a companion. I believe that it is a great source of news as well as a companion. This essay will discuss in detail how TV is being used to make people aware and acting as a companion with help of few examples in following paragraphs.
Firstly, TV viewers have options to view any national channel or international channel for news. This helps people to make them aware of latest happenings at the national level and at international level. Therefore, TV is a key source of news. In addition, TV is pivotal in building skills and knowledge. For example, science or history channels helps in enhancing learnings and knowledge. Hence, TV has become a necessity of life.
On the other hand, many believe that TV is a good companion for lonely and old age people. Through TV, people can watch movies, listen to music, and reality programs which are quite entertaining. Therefore, it also acts as a companion.
In summary, as explained in aforementioned paragraphs, TV is a very useful medium for news and awareness. It also acts as a great companion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
... that TV is medium to make people aware of latest developments, while others believe it a...
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Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
...s. This helps people to make them aware of latest happenings at the national level and at...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, in summary, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1045.0 1207.87684729 87% => OK
No of words: 217.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81566820276 5.00649968141 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90839273958 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548387096774 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 329.4 379.143842365 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5349900187 50.4703680194 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.6666666667 104.977214359 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4666666667 20.9669160288 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53333333333 7.25397266985 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256747157364 0.242375264174 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895246337979 0.0925447433944 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491675498503 0.071462118173 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161138569949 0.151781067708 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00977897477828 0.0609392437508 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 12.6369458128 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 53.1260098522 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.9458128079 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.08 11.5310837438 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.32886699507 93% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 55.0591133005 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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