Any recent invention that you think proved beneficial or detrimental to society.
One of the most recent conspicuous trends of current contemporary era is rise of technological domination. It is fair to say, advancement in technology has give planet earth a new ray of sunshine. Although there are demerits to this rising dominance in technology, there are equally; significant and positive results. This essay will discuss how technological advancement have bought some impressive changes and why some times results can be prolix.
Firstly, technology is by far the greatest invention of all times. It has not only shrunken the world and made earth a global society, but it has given every Individual a chance to speak their perspective. For instance, advancement in communication technology, through social media, Television and many other platforms to unite and show support, in case of injustice. Likewise it has been there when there is celebration to be made. Therefore, we can say technological revolution have enlightened the world with the sense of togetherness.
Secondly, technology also has it pitfalls and it can be quit depressing at times. It affect overall development, especially in younger generation because of their inability to comprehend and chose right or wrong. For example, a political unrest may result in hopelessness, and it’s fair to say it manifests itself. Hence, it can be said technology can have adverse effects and harm worlds tranquillity.
To conclude, this essay discussed why invention in technology has helped changed peoples prospective, and why it can be at times be an unwelcome influence.
In my opinion, it’s hope in the face of technology and it’s a positive one.
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- Involvement of youth in crimes is increasing at an alarming rate. Throw some light on the causes and possible solutions? 77
- Xenophobia has accelerated rapidly in the western countries. According to you what solutions can be proposed by government and individuals? 80
- As a result of advances in medical care. Average life expectancy is increasing for men and women. Do you think most people will see this as a positive development? What are the disadvantages of an ageing population for individuals and society? 80
- Nowadays TV has become an essential part of life. Medium to spread news & awareness and for some, it acts as a companion. What is your opinion about this? 83
- Marketing strategy for big companies should be placed on offer and discounts, and in what ways this can impact on their reputation. 72
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 369, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Likewise,
...and show support, in case of injustice. Likewise it has been there when there is celebra...
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Line 5, column 86, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'affects'?
Suggestion: affects
... it can be quit depressing at times. It affect overall development, especially in youn...
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Line 5, column 198, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to right'
Suggestion: to right
...their inability to comprehend and chose right or wrong. For example, a political unre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, likewise, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 260.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35769230769 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19193463993 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.2699314808 50.4703680194 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.8666666667 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.9669160288 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.25397266985 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0374413795394 0.242375264174 15% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0136421698753 0.0925447433944 15% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0234083924805 0.071462118173 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0206750695719 0.151781067708 14% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.018524810663 0.0609392437508 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 12.6369458128 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 53.1260098522 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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