The environment we are living in is in danger due to various problems…so who do u think should be responsible for solving it? Is it the governments, organization or each individual?
With the rising concern about the environment, we are living, is in danger, one might agree with the statement that each individual is responsible, I believe that governments should be held responsible for this. This essay will further discuss about the government that are responsible for making our environment in danger.
Governments are responsible to not only take care of the people needs but also to make the environment, where people live, to be safe. As government has the power to create laws which are meant to help people's problem, they should also need to check the environment condition where the people live. If environment seems to be a danger for a living, the government has all rights to enforce laws in order to not only protect but make the environment safe for habitat.
Furthermore, one might argue that each individual need to realize the change in the environment that is happening so has to act accordingly, but it is the government's responsibility for which it has been set up to serve the people, living in that environment before people realize that they are in trouble. This clearly states the governments, meant to serve people, are responsible for the environment they create as they have all legal powers to make a safe environment.
To conclude, governments are responsible for the environment they have created for the people living and not the individual to be blamed as the governments have the legal power to not only solve but also to serve people's needs to have better environments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 156, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...o has to act accordingly, but it is the governments responsibility for which it has been se...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, furthermore, if, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.75862068966 278% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 256.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.984375 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92550743462 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 139.433497537 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.43359375 0.580463131201 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 401.4 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.5024630542 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.5949667877 50.4703680194 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.5 104.977214359 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.0 20.9669160288 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.25397266985 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292050220866 0.242375264174 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148512224614 0.0925447433944 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04098242505 0.071462118173 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195106800117 0.151781067708 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025789275713 0.0609392437508 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 12.6369458128 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.9458128079 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.32886699507 89% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 55.0591133005 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.3980295567 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.