In underdeveloped countries, tourism has disadvantages and can be said the opposite as well. What is your opinion?
These days, there is an ongoing debate between people about tourism and underdeveloped countries. While it is possible to claim that tourism can harm a country’s environment, my view is that the advantages of tourism overweigh the disadvantages. In this essay, I will explain my point of view by analysing both sides of the argument.
First of all, there are several reasons why tourism is important for underdeveloped countries. One of them is that tourism industry provides major income in some countries such as Thailand and Cambodia. In addition it can be argued that without income from tourism, some countries will not be able to survive. It should also be taken into account that income from tourism industry are so huge that some countries like Saudi Arabia and Singapore are now trying to invest on the development of tourist attractions.
Those who argued for the disadvantages of tourism, had a different idea and said that it will actually be a good thing. Firstly, it is claimed that environment and nature of the countries are destroyed because of un-responsible travellers. Then there are concerns about changing in behaviour of local people due to the influence of foreigners’ demand. For example, one of the biggest tourist attracted country, Thailand, is famous for prostitute business.
While there are strong arguments on both sides of the case, my opinion is that foreign visitors should be welcomed under rules and regulations. I would strongly recommend that governments should enforce a suitable regulations for tourism industry in order to protect the nature environments.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, if, so, then, while, for example, in addition, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.5418719212 180% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29961089494 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05306914549 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568093385214 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 379.143842365 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2467172653 50.4703680194 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.769230769 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.25397266985 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227550986292 0.242375264174 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775332300413 0.0925447433944 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679731211377 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123760058007 0.151781067708 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406147195967 0.0609392437508 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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