Some people think is better for people to change their career at least once in their life and a different kind of jobs
Do you agree with this opinion?
"Change is the essence of life" and life is a storm; one must struggle for a better future. Some people assert that it is good for people that people should change their career once in their life and try their hands in other job while other one condemn this statement. I firmly agree with former notion which I will portray in subsequent segments.
There is a plethora of reasons which propitious my view point. The Predominant reason is that when people are trying their carrier in different areas then their are new jobs might give them good salaries as compare their previous salary packages and might be this job can make their future more bright. Besides this, switching carrier from one to another also gives the opportunity to llearn new things and skills. Such as if a person is doing job at a shop and then he switch his job and go in marketing job then it will inhance his knowledge and he came to know about the things and new products which are prevailing in the world.
Leaping further, those who have a wide range of career under their belts will have more Job security in the long run. Instead of being proficient in one job it is good to be proficient in two or more professions and if this type of person can lost his job for any reasons then he can seek out his new job in different field. A good example of this is ,a friend of mine nowadays,who is a good cook actually he was Java developer but for some issues he was fired from his job and then we find his new job in a esteemed restaurant and how he is a head cook over all the chefs. Moreover, it is good to break the monotony and try the luck in other Career.it is normally seen in the people that firstly when they started their first job, they are very happy but after the passage of time they feel overwhelmed so that type of people should try new jobs which creates a new excitement about their work in them.Apart from this, it gives a chance to a person that he can prove his superiority.
To recapitulate, everyone has their own views I do not deny any of them but I still reiterate my opinion, that people should try their hands in two or more career which may bring new opportunities and immense benefits for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, still, then, while, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 61.0 24.0651302605 253% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 411.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39659367397 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3527087295 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489051094891 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.2054182974 49.4020404114 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.583333333 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.25 20.7667163134 165% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28082250438 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113883238152 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115181757297 0.0667982634062 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217432785015 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123599725775 0.056905535591 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.89 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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