Living abroad
There are many different opinions about living abroad. For the great majority of people living a world is the best opportunity of your life. And it is not doubt of it. However, living abroad have both disadvantages and advantages.
Firstly let me explain the advantages. In a foreing country you will know the places, cultures,music,belief and traditions.
Moreover you are going to grow up you work or your study as well as your lenguaje.
On the top of that, you will become indepent and develop as a person with differents knowledges.
Neverthless, let us move to disadvantages. Although it is clear that are more advantages than disadvantages. It must be recognised that the disventages are stronger.
As the saying goes “there are not place as you home”
That is right.
Your family is the best thing in your life, and you will miss they a lot. As well as your friends.
You will be away from your home and it is very difficult be away from the people who you love.
Futhermore the tickets to go to another country are expensive. Thus it could be difficult the visits.
In the final analysis. Although is a great opportunity to be a better person, we should perhaps be questioned if it is what you want.
In my point of view, is a perfect opportunity for me. But i will reach the money to my family in order that they came to visit me when they want
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 52.1666666667 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1138.0 1977.66487455 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 244.0 407.700716846 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66393442623 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91857381243 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549180327869 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 618.680645161 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.1344086022 55% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.9678251005 48.9658058833 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 54.1904761905 100.406767564 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.619047619 20.6045352989 56% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 11.0 4.53405017921 243% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12696096209 0.236089414692 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047313531163 0.076458572812 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127480917174 0.0737576698707 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0443562878693 0.150856017488 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140266898217 0.0645574589148 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 11.7677419355 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 58.1214874552 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.1575268817 51% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.56 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 86.8835125448 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.0537634409 64% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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