“In a war of ideas, it is people who get killed”. Does a common man suffer from a group’s ideology? Express your opinion, and support the same with reasons and examples.
Man being a social animal usually prefers to belong to a group. Sometimes personal ideas may vary from that of the group. It is agreed that common man suffers from group’s ideology. Many groups with fringe ideas force a common man to act in group’s interest as well as deprive him of his liberty.
It is felt by many that common man often sears from the heat caused by groups ideology. This has been apparent since time immemorial. For example, in 1960’s, America’s ruling party congress was anti-communism and decided to send its troops to Vietnam’s to support the Democratic party. Many common Americans were forced to join the military to participate in this war. It goes without saying in spite of people’s unwillingness to follow the group, he has to be the victim of group’s ideology.
Moreover, wars stemming from various ideology deprives a person of his liberty. In a recent case of Islamic State, few people with extreme ideology are killing innocent people in the name of religion. People living in IS invaded areas have to act according to these people’s fringe ideologies where a common man who has nothing to do with it is being killed ruthlessly. Thus this argument in support of rubric is difficult to debunk.
In a nutshell, wars of ideas compel a common man to act against his will as well as robs him of his freedom. Henceforth, the general public has to pay a heavy price for groups ideology. As long as groups work in their self-interest, this trend is unlikely to dissipate.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, as for, as to, for example, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 8.36945812808 12% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 31.9359605911 150% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 261.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92337164751 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90730130446 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9845829367 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3125 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3125 20.9669160288 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 7.25397266985 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 2.75862068966 290% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40398476187 0.242375264174 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126419380428 0.0925447433944 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100439329543 0.071462118173 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242331195636 0.151781067708 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0938309998317 0.0609392437508 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 12.6369458128 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.1260098522 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 11.5310837438 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 55.0591133005 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.