'Nowadays many young people leave home at an early age to either study or work in another city. ' Do you think this has more advantages or disadvantages for young people?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in leaving home early. While some people advocate that it will be beneficial four younger generation to leave home to enlighten their careers, there are other intellectuals who are disregards this phenomenon. This essay will discuss all the viewpoints and overcome the soaring concern.
There are myriad of arguments in favour of this stance. The most preponderant one is that young people are energetic and want to get exponential hype in their career.
They realized early and look for better opportunities internationally or in metropolitan cities of their countries. For example, in Pakistan one line of thought has a belief system that once you got a degree, you should try to grape positions in a high life of Karachi. It can also be argued that due to numerous international firms chances of getting significant jobs becomes higher. In addition, they have the ideal time to experience diverse cultures and city life of metropolitan which in turn enhance their capability. Thereby, it clearly validates the aforementioned reasons.
There are several causes why young people have to stay in their cities where they were born. One of them is that as people leaving the home country will raise the concerns of resource thread in their home. As they have already availed perspective education, it is their utmost responsibility to serve the nation. For instance, it has been observed that young doctors are willing to work in prestigious hospitals against working in remote areas. Needless to say, it is a high time when a government has to invest an enormous amount of money in such campaigns. It is a state responsibility to initiate lucrative programs where educated people could serve their people which utilize their experiences and in return, the nation will see a substantial level of growth in terms of literacy and economy.
After taking all the points into consideration, without a shadow of the doubt, I am inclined to believe that it is young people's right to choose the career which enhances their skills. In contrast, it is a government responsibility to provide a better environment to all the inhabitants of their region in order to utilize their skill.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 247, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
... careers, there are other intellectuals who are disregards this phenomenon. This essay ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, while, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 5.94088669951 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 39.0 20.9802955665 186% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 31.9359605911 169% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1886.0 1207.87684729 156% => OK
No of words: 371.0 242.827586207 153% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08355795148 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 3.92707691288 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91496442581 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 139.433497537 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563342318059 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 379.143842365 159% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 4.6157635468 260% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6551724138 142% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8655398571 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.777777778 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6111111111 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72222222222 7.25397266985 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 2.91625615764 274% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181376895319 0.242375264174 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561478597967 0.0925447433944 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460513456178 0.071462118173 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101290188815 0.151781067708 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418967425405 0.0609392437508 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 55.0591133005 183% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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