Sooner or later, the environment and transportation problems will be surpassed by the use of electric automobiles. However, there is an argument against this idea, since others impacts will affect the nature. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the use of electric transport.
To begin, electric cars are the solution to stop the use of petrol and others environmental harmful products. Certainly, the advent of electric cars will collaborate to finish the actual situation. For example, the automotive industry will stop the production of petrol automobiles and invest in the new tendency. The solution of the use of dangerous chemicals, which destroy the nature will be solved by the employment of electric transportation.
In contrast, the environment is already damaged by hydroelectric businesses, which destroy rivers and seas around the world. Obviously, these companies will raise their production causing more environmental problems. For instance, the death of the Amazon River caused by construction of new hydroelectric plants. The damage to rivers and seas will be dramatically increased by giant hydroelectric companies around the world.
This essay discussed how the implementation of electric transportation will be more harmful to the nature. In my opinion, the technological advancements in electric automobiles are environmentally destructive than any other chemical and will the cause more damages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, for example, for instance, in contrast, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 20.9802955665 19% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 976.0 1207.87684729 81% => OK
No of words: 169.0 242.827586207 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77514792899 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.92707691288 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.39207602444 2.71678728327 125% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 139.433497537 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544378698225 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 305.1 379.143842365 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 7.0 1.56157635468 448% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.2556165051 50.4703680194 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.6 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 7.25397266985 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277243520088 0.242375264174 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115779423794 0.0925447433944 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0970811043264 0.071462118173 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195401209202 0.151781067708 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874546967168 0.0609392437508 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 53.1260098522 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.95 11.5310837438 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 55.0591133005 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 200 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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