Using a computer everyday can have more negative than positive effects on your children.
Do you agree or disagree?
Childhood is the most important stage of anybody’s life and parents should be more conscious
about their growing. It is my belief that computers are being the most commonly accessed and
demanded electronic tool among the children on daily basis which leads to dangerous effect
which overtakes the advantages.
Everyone knows that the childhood is the best time to learn many things. At this age, if they use
computer at regular interval in a right way, they will become familiar with the subject
knowledge and they feel technically sound in their college days. There are many advantages
associated with daily usage of computers. Firstly, it is helping them for their educational
purposes through e-learning. Secondly, through brainstorming games, they become more
competitive and very good in decision making. Furthermore, those games improve creativity
and innovation at an early age. Also, the planning and management skills are getting shined and
helping them in their career.
On the contrary, using computers continuously, destructing their vision and isolating them from
the outside world. Moreover, they get dumped in their studies too, if they get addicted to
playing games in the computer. Additionally, it makes them as an introvert person resulting in
lack of participation in physical games which is primarily affecting their physical fitness and
making them as a lazy person.
In summary, even though, it offers a sensational revelation on both ends when both positives
and negatives are closely analyzed the addictively makes me to agree with the topic and the
parents should ensure that their children are not getting addicted to the computers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 30, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a right way" with adverb for "right"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... they use computer at regular interval in a right way, they will become familiar with the sub...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, in summary, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48854961832 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81563516993 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614503816794 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6082874187 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.615384615 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.38176352705 456% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0976872894393 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0293220519025 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036005107361 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0268485905305 0.151304729494 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311408156494 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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