As a result of advances in medical care, average life expectancy is increasing for men and women. Do you think most people will see this as a positive development? What are the disadvantages of an ageing population for individuals and society? Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
The longevity of human life has increased exponentially with the advancement of innovation in the medical field. Many people argue that this advancement has a lot of drawbacks because of the aging population, while the proponents deny and see the advantages in it. This essay will discuss the advantages and demerits of the aging population due to medical advancement.
To begin with, we have treatment and solution for all contemporary diseases which was not there a decade ago. Firstly, a cure for many diseases was found and the source of the disease itself can be eradicated with this advancements. Moreover, sophisticated operations are conducted with the help of artificially intelligent robots which increases the success rate of the procedure. For instance, the medical association of India has declared that they are using Augmented Reality in the medical field to identify the root cause of the problem. Thus, medical innovations and advancement is a boon to humankind.
On the contrary, due to innovative medical treatment, the life-span of humans has increased. As a result, the population of senior citizens will be increased in a country. Furthermore, this possesses an economic threat to the government since the government is spending more amount of money to look after the aged people. For instance, a majority of the population in Canada is estimated to be more than 55 years which creates a huge burden for the government to incur the cost of these citizens. Therefore, an aging population will influence the economy of the country where medical care is free.
In essence, medical advancements have both, its pros and cons. However, in my opinion, the improvement in the medical field is a positive development for the people and it is the responsibility of the government to manage the aging population.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 5.75862068966 434% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 296.0 242.827586207 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19256756757 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06911312118 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 139.433497537 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540540540541 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 505.8 379.143842365 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 8.0 1.56157635468 512% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0545543759 50.4703680194 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.466666667 104.977214359 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5333333333 7.25397266985 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301046210176 0.242375264174 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0996599372937 0.0925447433944 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472384573137 0.071462118173 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184650926803 0.151781067708 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039919691662 0.0609392437508 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 12.6369458128 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 55.0591133005 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.94827586207 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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