extreme sports like skiing, rafting, diving should be banned. agree or disagree?
Sports helps in overall development of an individual. Extreme sports are enjoyed by thrill seekers and people with daredevil attitude towards life. Although, sports can improvise cognitive skills, it can have life affecting changes. This essay discussed, how sports can improve our critical thinking capabilities and extreme sports can have fatal outcome.
Firstly, high strength sports demand high focus. The ability to think on the spot is crucial to overcome challenges. For instance Building focus and higher concentration skills can be incorporated in our daily life, at work and personal life. Extreme sports like skiing, rafting and diving help us build our concentration, and ability to handle stress level, which may ultimately make us resistant to any circumstances. Hence, we can say sports challenges us to come out of our comfort zone and be durable to any events.
Secondly, sports can have adverse outcome. Sports related injuries can be fatal and life threatening at times. It can make a person physically dysfunction and leave them dependent on others support to preform dat to day activities. For example, motorcycle accident, skydiving mishaps can leave us physically impaired. Therefore, it can be said extreme sports can change a persons life by making them unable to fiction normally.
To conclude, this essay discussed how sports can help us enhance our on the spot thinking skills and accident caused by extreme sports can be fatal. In my opinion, playing all sports should be supported and I am in favour of extreme sports.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 373, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...can be said extreme sports can change a persons life by making them unable to fiction n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 6.10837438424 262% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 5.94088669951 17% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29032258065 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76967702486 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596774193548 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.733169115 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0 104.977214359 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.9669160288 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.25397266985 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219831708406 0.242375264174 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830724310219 0.0925447433944 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608451956764 0.071462118173 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155900622578 0.151781067708 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459625874989 0.0609392437508 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.1260098522 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.9458128079 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.5310837438 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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