Nowadays, most people use gadgets and high-tech devices for their daily tasks. Do you think technology has made people's life easier or not?
Over the past couple of decades, whether technology ameliorates people's life has generated a great deal of
debate and discussion among people from all walks of life. The popular belief seems to be that technology
enhances the quality of life. I cannot but agree with this view for social and economic reasons.
First and foremost, it is a well-established fact that technology facilitates our daily life at a remarkable rate.
Simply put, thanks to technology, diverse tasks such as studying and shopping have been facilitated.
In fact, rarely can we see people who benefit from cutting-edge technology and have difficulties with
their daily works.
More significantly, not only can technology make life easier, but also it can alleviate the quality of communication
around the globe. Undoubtedly, the vast majority of people use their mobile phones to communicate. Hence,
gadget-filled homes could be considered as a positive issue.
Another compelling argument in support of this view could be the fact that a large number of businesses have
developed on the basis of the Internet. Evidently, these modern-day jobs such as e-shops can increase the rate of
employment at a noticeable rate. In the long run, it culminates in a progressive society.
Having considered all side, I conclude that modern devices and appliances have a colossal role in improving
people's way of life due to reasons such as facilitating daily works, making communication easier and pave
the way for the emergence of new businesses.
- Nowadays,computers have caused more problems than benefits in societies.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 77
- A recent trend in entertainment is to adapt classic works in literature for movies and TV shows. In your opinion, is this a good approach or not? 77
- Nowadays,computers cause more problems than benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view? 78
- Learning foreign languages in primary school in more effective for the students? Do you agree or disagree? 77
- More and more student are studying at universities abroad for diverse reasons. Discuss advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad. 77
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, well, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 242.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34297520661 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06692032391 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623966942149 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0668886836 50.4703680194 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4615384615 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 7.25397266985 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.12807881773 363% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239399894874 0.242375264174 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745330944285 0.0925447433944 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649498718089 0.071462118173 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0695350489653 0.151781067708 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05671725052 0.0609392437508 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 53.1260098522 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 55.0591133005 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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