Talk about pros/cons of this era as is full of daily inventions.
Nowadays, we live in a world full of inventions, which has attracted many controversies and drawn attention from the public. Some people agree that these technological advances have made our lives easier, while on the other hand, stands a perspective that they have negative effects on mankind. This essay will elaborate on both sides and thus, will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are various merits associated with daily inventions like the computer and the internet. The most conspicuous one stems from the fact that these technological advances have paved a way for easier and instant communication to the people who are away from us. As an illustration, skype, facebook and zoom have provided a platform for unlimited and free video calling to our relatives and friends. Moreover, the internet has provided access to a vast reservoir of information in the form of Wikipedia and Google. Thus, we can say that these inventions are a boon to humanity.
Nevertheless, there are some downsides, which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of these advancements. The most alarming one roots form the fact that the social networking sites on the internet have increased the divorce rates and loss of bonds among people. Furthermore, people are glued to the screens of smartphones and tablets that they do not talk in reality anymore. In addition to this, prolonged exposure to computers has adversely affected the health of the people with back pains and eyesore. Hence, there is no doubt that these inventions have negative consequences on the people.
In the light of above discussion, one can conclude that the impact of technological inventions is prominent although they have some minor drawbacks that can be overlooked.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, while, in addition, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1207.87684729 123% => OK
No of words: 284.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21478873239 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89926036645 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573943661972 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2722000793 50.4703680194 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.785714286 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 7.25397266985 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.062724401467 0.242375264174 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0217446206746 0.0925447433944 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0313576610866 0.071462118173 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0351123762719 0.151781067708 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290421822569 0.0609392437508 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 12.6369458128 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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