Do you think a consumer should avoid over packed products or it is the responsibility of the producer to avoid extra packaging of products?” Give your views or any relevant example with your own experience.
Over-packing has become a controversial issue among the public all around the world. Although this topic is regarded by a considerable number of inhabitants as thoroughly both constructive and positive, others hold opponents views. I am inclined to profoundly believe that the act of packing products is beneficial as it could develop brilliant aspects for its adherents.
There are several reasons why packing products is advantageous. First and foremost, this action can create eye-catching among customers and has enormous effects on the rate of sales. For instance, according to recent research which was conducted by Tehran University, the factories that use attractive packing for their products do not face financial problems, and it is because that they are succeed in selling their products by being bolder than others. Secondly, using an appropriate packing for products can provide settlers healthier nutrient including food or fruit. It is crystal clear that the packing can preserve the food or fruit from different weather conditions and hitting.
On the one hand, there is no doubt that this process of packing make companies to cost. Undoubtedly, there is a great deal amount of time and money is spent annually in this way. Therefore, this cost affect the price of prodicts and customers are forced to pay more money. Another negative trait of packing is, some companies seduce their customers by designing attractive packing even though they do not have sufficient quality.
In conclusion, while the over-packing of products has some demerits, I strongly believe that its benefits outweigh the drawbacks.
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Suggestion: succeeded
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...money. Another negative trait of packing is, some companies seduce their customer...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 31.9359605911 85% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 255.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86029978829 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635294117647 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1787337967 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.923076923 104.977214359 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140174712546 0.242375264174 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0507383218412 0.0925447433944 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428737095063 0.071462118173 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0873576265607 0.151781067708 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295742837978 0.0609392437508 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 11.5310837438 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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