You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and was not able to play with you at the weekend. You decide write to him in hospital, telling him about the match.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
-tell him which team won
-describe the conditions of the day
-see how if you felt about the match
Hello! How are you? I am fine. I was sorry to heard about your accident and I hope you feel better now. The purpose of mine to penning down this epistle is to told you about the match of Cricket, which was held on last Sunday.
It was very disappointing match. Our team make 250 scores, only 2 scores were less from the opposing team. But at the last ball, they take another wicket. This was the most awful moment forever team. If, you were in the match, then we could definitely want the match, because you are the man of match for our team. Unfortunately, you meet with an accident and did not able to play it with us.
I think, the weather was to blame. On that day the weather was very wet due to this the pitch was very muddy. At the end of the match, the ground was very slippery, because of this, every one feel exhausted in the playground. Moreover, I am not satisfied with the performance. As, the team was done great efforts for this match but all were gone to vain. The aftermaths or not as per as the expectations.
The next match will play on next month. Moreover, all the team members send their regards for you. I hope you will find very soon and the next match, we will play together.
Yours truly
Aman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h, we will play together. Yours truly Aman
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, then, as to, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1002.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30042918455 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18782270337 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562231759657 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6804123711 158% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1231023518 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 50.1 76.5299724578 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.65 16.8248392259 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.15 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343497471665 0.216113520407 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0983495430971 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703837397539 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207143578749 0.12726935374 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784081905777 0.0580467560999 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.6 8.37731958763 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.48 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.08 7.59969072165 80% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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