The 21st century has begun. What changes do you think this new century will bring?
Every century has brought significant contributions within a great variety of domains, especially in the technological sectors. From my point of view, the new era will accelerate the expansion of technological inventions, but, at the same time the impact on the environment will be highly negative. I will explain my statement, in the following essay.
To begin with, innovative devices are a crucial aspect of our lives, so scientists will continue to improve this industry. For instance, electrical cars will undoubtedly become a reality in the next 100 years. Actually, big companies such as Renault, has already presented similar prototypes, and it is assumed that these new cars will enter the market by 2030. Moreover, developers try to write intelligent software, in order to remove the human factor when driving a car. Furthermore, people dream to travel along the space. I have recently seen, that the rocket which is able to land, was invented. This will allow people to use the same rocket more than one time, saving precious time and money. Probably the next step is to build a space ship.
To continue with, in 21st century the impact of industries on the environment will be disastrous. The multitude of gases and waste produced by both industries and humans, contribute to the global warming. If people do not work together to solve this issue, this phenomenon will be a threaten to the planet, and consequently to us. Unfortunately, the last events demonstrate that the world is not going in the right direction. One of the most powerful countries decided not to be part of a global agreement, whose purpose was to take action to slow down the greenhouse effect. The catastrophic outcome is already visible, since abnormal weather conditions could be noticed all over the Terra, this year. I live in a country where winter means low temperatures and snow, and yet, it is the end of the February, and I have seen them yet. Not to mention, that it snowed in Sahara, in January.
To summarize, the 21st century will definitely bring major changes that will impact people's lives, both positively and negatively. Innovative technologies and weather challenges are expected to dominate the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 282, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...lve this issue, this phenomenon will be a threaten to the planet, and consequently to us. ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, consequently, furthermore, if, moreover, so, as to, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1851.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05737704918 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85667595461 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601092896175 0.524837075471 115% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3885362959 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1428571429 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4285714286 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90476190476 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23466630287 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549125098989 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757829910693 0.0737576698707 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147014715791 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548835092474 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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