task 2: Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?
Some individuals claim that scientific studies should be conducted by governments instead of companies. I agree with the view that not only governments but every company needs to be responsible for carrying out research.
To begin with, there is no doubt that the authorities have a responsibility to conduct scientific research.This is because the governments of different countries can easily co-operate with each other, they may be able to conduct studies on a larger scale, which require a larger investment. For instance, the UK and the EU share common fundamental challenges such as dealing with climate change, tackling infectious diseases in people, animals and plants. Thanks to these collaborations, the top scientists across countries can resolve these fundamental challenges. Another reason for this is that governments tend to pay attention to research areas that can benefit society as a whole. Many Studies related to environmental issues and crime rates are great examples.
However, I would argue that companies play such an important role in conducting scientific research. The first reason is that since generating profit is the top priority for each company, they would make an effort to conduct research more quickly and more efficiently. For example, a company, like Teva has been carrying out extensive research to solve generic drug problem and then provide them for patients. This can lower out-of-pocket costs patients. The second, by investing in research fields of companies will relieve burden on government’s budget. As a result, the authorities would also have more cash to spend on other main areas including accommodation, health and medical services and particularly education which leads to improvement in the quality of life of the whole community.
In inclusion, I believe that both governments and private companies should be involved in research activities.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-01-10 | ketan | 67 | view |
| 2020-01-07 | trongduong96 | 89 | view |
| 2019-12-21 | khietquynh2402 | 78 | view |
| 2019-12-12 | Yui | 89 | view |
| 2019-12-01 | Habui | 61 | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...sibility to conduct scientific research.This is because the governments of different...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, then, for example, for instance, no doubt, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.52218430034 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10298037821 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607508532423 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3300289335 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.571428571 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224418795926 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837249737978 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844185383376 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186463741072 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104620032968 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.