For a successful company, does selling products depend more on the company’s reputation or if they provide discount and free offers? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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For a successful company, does selling products depend more on the company’s reputation or if they provide discount and free offers? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is conspicuous that, shopping culture has been changed from the last one decade. More and more companies these days offering lucrative deals to gravitate more customers toward themselves. Considering this, some people believe that offering discounts by companies decrease company's brand value, while others opine it helps to increase organization’s revenue. This essay will give assertion on both sides of the contention before delivering plausible conclusion.

To begin, people who claim discounting degrades brand value claim that, the profit margin in the stores will decline as the goods are sold at reduced prices. Sometimes, these prices may even be below than market value. Furthermore, giving discounts to customers may encourage them to ask for it all the time and if the marketer does not give a best deal, they may get discouraged and look at other places for the same.

On the other hand, offering discounts increases the customer base of the organizations. People prefer to do more shopping during a sale, discounts encourage people to spend more. Moreover, many businesses have monthly, quarterly or yearly sales goals. For instance, if a business is in danger of missing these goals, offering discounts can help the business to meet their sales figures.

To sum up, I would like to say, although discounts decreases the margin of the company, but it helps customers to buy branded things at reasonable price. Thus, giving discounts do not decrease brand value of the company but increase customer base.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, so, thus, while, for instance, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 243.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32510288066 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7951506721 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 139.433497537 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654320987654 0.580463131201 113% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4142016061 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5384615385 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6923076923 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.25397266985 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193014531513 0.242375264174 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664923768246 0.0925447433944 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542941501559 0.071462118173 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114905108484 0.151781067708 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265977844876 0.0609392437508 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 12.6369458128 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.32886699507 102% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 82.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 74.5 Out of 90
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