Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for students to study history and literature than it is for them to study science and mathematics. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
People study to improve their knowledge. Some people believe that studying history and literature is more important than studying science and mathematics, however; I do not agree with this statement for several reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First, science and mathematics are useful in our life. To be specific, science can explain a lot of phenomena that happened in our daily life such as the sound of the thunderstorm is followed by the light because the speed of light is faster than the sound. While studying mathematics can improve ourselves in money management. For example, my uncle is good at stock investment because he knows the meaning behind the numbers in the chart and can analyze it correctly. He always makes big profits by investing.
Second, studying science and mathematics give us the sense of achievement. To illustrate, I love to study mathematics while I was in high school. Every time I solved a math problem, I will feel the sense of achievement because I figured out the answer by myself. As for science, I love to do science experiment because it is interesting and can improve my knowledge. I love to use the microscope to observe the shapes of the cells from different plants. When the teachers wanted us to find out what plant it is by observing its cells through the microscope, I felt confident and pleasant if I answered it correctly.
Finally, it is true that studying history and literature can increase our intellectual and writing ability. Not only can we learn from the historic events and people by studying history and literature, but also improve our ability in writing good essays because we know many things that can rich the content. Nevertheless, it does not mean that studying history and literature is more important than science and mathematics since they both have their own values.
In conclusion. I do not agree with the statement that studying history and literature is more important than science and mathematics due to the reasons mentioned above.
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... always makes big profits by investing. Second, studying science and mathematics...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, while, as for, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1693.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97941176471 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80867877668 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502941176471 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4101926243 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5882352941 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347916182193 0.236089414692 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109020056454 0.076458572812 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133336541299 0.0737576698707 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248313000794 0.150856017488 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14829405082 0.0645574589148 230% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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