birthday
Dear Mr. Wong,
I am writing this letter to express my gratitude for the immaculate service and organising the unforgettable 90th birthday of my grandfather. I am very content with your service.The event was on 21st of February in the main ballroom. There were over 100 guests, mainly being elderly friends of my grandfather and a few younger family members.
I really appreciate the special attention given to the guests. The ballroom was conveniently accessible form the parking lot. Some of the guests that used wheelchairs were able to join with comfort thanks to the ramps located at the entrance. Additionally, the theme of the party was well thought of and comfortable seats made it relaxing for the guests to enjoy their time. The highlight of the night, was the food and people enjoyed it a lot.
Furthermore, I would like to thank your team for their adequate care, specially “Lily” who went out of the way and helped in making this event memorable.
I am now your loyal customer and I will surely recommend your hotel to my friends as well.
Yours sincerely,
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- you organised a 90th birthday party 67
- You organised a 90th birthday party for a relative at a local hotel. There were several elderly guests and the party was very successful. 67
- birthday 11
- birthday 11
- You organised a 90th birthday party for a relative at a local hotel. There were several elderly guests and the party was very successful. 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 179, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...er. I am very content with your service.The event was on 21st of February in the ma...
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Line 5, column 127, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...iently accessible form the parking lot. Some of the guests that used wheelchairs were able ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96195652174 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85941365591 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657608695652 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3384630631 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0476989512452 0.216113520407 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0142838140065 0.0766984524023 19% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451693859349 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.024547906715 0.12726935374 19% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425182216498 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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