Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system.
Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds.
As we are living in the society, which is growing, evolving and moving towards modernization, in terms of technology as well as increasing intellectual ability of an individual. Such as modernization in transportation and modernization in choosing any individuals career to secure his future. In order to bind all the elements society, there is a need to follow a legal system. Hence, the many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and legal system does not hold true because of the only reason that laws cannot change what in peoples mind.
In modern society, freedom has been given to all the individuals such as to speak, to ask questions, to select their career and so on. But selecting career as a contract killer or choosing character that abuse people around must not be part of their freedom. Here, the laws and legal system appears to be a controlling factor where there is a punishment for every illegal and hasty activities, such as killing and hurting people or abusing them. Even if such thoughts came into peoples mind, they know the consequences to go in that path.
Another example is that as people have different ways for transportation and laws and legal system have rules as it mentioned as traffic rules and available ways to follow on the street. Consider if such traffic rules are not there, then people will travel through their own ways and can take wrong side as a shortcut to reach any place as soon as possible but might met with an accident and cost his life to death. This is the major society problem that is managed and controlled by traffic legal problem and made people to act according to rules and not to follow shortcuts in illegal ways.
As we know about human behaviour, it is bit difficult to change what an individual is thinking and what thoughts running in his mind. For example , if a person living in USA where you cannot throw used plastic cans or water bottles on street because you might get punished by laws available in USA to behave and act in public places. Because of those rules, most of the people won’t do it like throw water bottle on the street, even if that individual wanted to do it. But consider that guy went some other country where there are no such rules, here he can throw bottles and cans on the street if it in his mind. So it is true that it is difficult to change peoples’ mentality and thoughts but these laws and legal system can at least control them.
Thus, it is quite impossible to know what is in peoples’ mind or what he his thinking and so no possible ways to alter their thinking. But these laws and legal system plays a very important role in modern society that keep people stick around and act in legal ways.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 319, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'elements'' or 'element's'?
Suggestion: elements'; element's
...re his future. In order to bind all the elements society, there is a need to follow a le...
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Line 4, column 41, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'bitten'.
Suggestion: bitten
...As we know about human behaviour, it is bit difficult to change what an individual ...
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Line 4, column 145, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...houghts running in his mind. For example , if a person living in USA where you can...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le stick around and act in legal ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, then, thus, well, as to, at least, for example, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 32.0 14.8657303371 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2243.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 486.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61522633745 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69525374022 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52647021512 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 215.323595506 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.456790123457 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 697.5 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6863583487 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.611111111 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 23.4991977007 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.21951772744 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 5.13820224719 175% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362406678159 0.243740707755 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11612265267 0.0831039109588 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145315343145 0.0758088955206 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21558414199 0.150359130593 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110683843316 0.0667264976115 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 48.8420337079 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.