You have rented a car for few day from an agency. However, there are some problems with car.
Tell him/her the problen of the car.
What you want the agency to do now
How you feel about the problem.
Dear sir
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the car which I hired from your prominent company. The number of the car is HR 3542 and model is Scoda Rapid . At the time of hiring I have told you that I want to go to out of station for 10 days. Therefore, I hired it 2 days before to manage all the things easily.
I regret to advise you that I have noticed many issues in it. Firstly, the aircondition in the car is not working properly as you know that in the month of april it is very essential. Secondly, compressor also looks damaged so it can create major problem in long journey. Apart from it, sliding of the window glass of the back seat also not up to the mark. Eventually, it can become the biggest menance when AC will not in work.
I would be appreciate if you could take some proactive steps to solve all these concerns. If you do not have any spare model of scoda you are requested to surrounds me with another one or return my deposit amount. We have planned everything as well as reservation has also done in hotel. Thus, you deal with this issue on priority basics.
We all were extremely exited for our trip but when I realised the problem I thought now all in vain. Then, I talked with my father and he assured me that it is not major issue because your company has prestigious reputation and you have enormous cars for hire. Hence, I made myself little bit relexed but this is not good for your famous company. It is your prior duty to check the car before issuing. Now, you sort out this problem and true your punch line" customers are like a god".
Now, I am hearing from you as soon as possiblem contact me on my phone no given below.
Yours faithfully
Urvashi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, apart from, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 58.0 32.9175257732 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 937.175257732 151% => OK
No of words: 324.0 206.0 157% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37345679012 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 3.78020617076 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38179684545 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 127.690721649 151% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595679012346 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 290.88556701 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6804123711 158% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4799524278 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.85 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35 4.34317383033 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 43.0 2.54639175258 1689% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322996649568 0.216113520407 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851925692808 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563431030985 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169631373472 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441395606599 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.