Most countries believe that international tourism has harmful effects. Why do they think so. How do you change their views?
We are living in such an era where the tourism industry is rising in the entire world . Most nations argued that it has adverse effect on the residents environment and economy of the country .To overcome this concern government or the authority should take stringent steps .This essay throw the light of the negatives of tourism and the views of changes.
There are manifold point to short up its demerits .First and foremost ,Increasing tourism has huge impact on the living standard as well as the attitude of the native people . To be specific; Migrators have modern life style which allure massive number of laymen .They prefer to accomplish modern ways and underestimate their own standards of living . Furthermore , economy of that country is also the main parts which is effected by this big menace .As foreigner visitors have different currency so they ignore impact to boost their economy.
Over and above ,Rising visitors are responsible for fall down the value of their own culture because attracting toward the overseas traditions most youngster follow the foreigner rule and regulations . Consequences,they neglect their environment and energy resources are also affected by the Pedestrian because of increasing transportation and excessively use of the resources such as ,water ,ail ,diesel.
On the second side ,It is the fundamental duty of the official to implement some regulation simultaneously they should proved guides to guide the visitors about the lifestyle of that country .Moreover ,they also encourage the foreigners to stay in house as compared to hotals which help to save economy as well as resources.
In conclusion ,It is the fact rising ventures effect on the main prospects of that country .But to take some steps it can be controlled
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, well, as for, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20979020979 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82219933866 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597902097902 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.9563956307 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.555555556 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.7777777778 20.7667163134 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14150718604 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546924421358 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0246001806269 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0701871772469 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025567260287 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 13.0946893788 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.