Analysts tell us that many people today feel stressed and think they have
insufficient control over their lives. What problems do such feelings cause for
people? What remedies could you suggest?
Most people, nowadays, experience stress and difficult to deal with controlling their lives. There are several reasons why does it happen, and this essay will identify the immediate causes and propose some solutions.
First of all, financial worries might lead to unnecessary stress which could be a burden for people. In the family households, having money seems to be essential to cover the economic necessity. When they have a lack of money, they would probably feel anxious, especially if the consumer price index went up high. Another causes, perhaps, the workplace stress in the case of project work which might encourage people to work harder. Thus, they are unable to sleep properly, and they have a little time to catch up with family.
However, the possible solutions for dealing with the problem above such as management of money can alleviate financial stress. Although people could earn much money if they have a wildly extravagant lifestyle, it would become useless. A second suggestion is for those people who only concern on the jobs with creating a balanced schedule. This practical steps could decrease a stress-level because they have known what needs to do and prioritize first, for example separating work-related tasks from leisure and family time such as resisting the urge to catch up with emails in the evening.
In summary, money problems and pressure from the workplace appear to be the main causes. And, the practical solutions could be taken to solve these problems such as money management and time management.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, thus, for example, in summary, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15139442231 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57626332969 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617529880478 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4710430486 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4615384615 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19691001818 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064118742864 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353341216793 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108653028975 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319378683775 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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