Some people think that it is more important to plant trees in open areas of towns and cities than to build more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree,?
We are blessed with the nature comprising fuel, water, earth, flora and funna. Presently, it is thought to be lucrative to grow plenty of trees in wide areas of commercial sides instead of constructing homes asserted by a plethora of people. I am strongly accord with this statement that trees are essential part of human's life.
To begin with, availability of enormous trees plays a magnificent role to uplift the standard of people's heath. To be specific, numerous factories and vehicles emit smoke which has become the biggest menance for mankind. Thus, they suffer from various health issues like heart attack, high blood pressure, asthma, and so on. Trees surround people with fresh air and oxygen and inhale carbon dioxide. As a result, having a wide range of trees allows people to lead a safe and healthy life.
Secondly, trees nourish people with its exceptional products such as fruits, vegetables, cotton, jute, rice, medicine, sugar, wood etcetera. Therefore, presence of trees enrich people with all the required nutritions. Moreover, people earn their livelihood in the presence of average rain. Hence, role of trees in bringing good rain is beyond comparison. For instance India is a agricultural country and most of the people earn their bread and butter because of massive crops. Trees play huge role in emerging of rain. Eventually, abundance of trees are beneficial for human survival.
However, trees are major part in human life but need of homes is desperately required. A person can not relish their life in the absence of suitable house. House flourish them with many amenities as secure life, place to cook food, take care of juveniles, having rest. Thence, housing facilities are the priority of a person.
To conclude, although, fundamental need of a house is important but for better environment and healthy life it is our prime duty to grow more and more trees.
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but, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, for instance, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10576923077 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58588305489 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637820512821 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.0264666593 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.65 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 46.0 5.01903807615 917% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133916029718 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391399031723 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033648552486 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0752962790021 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400927237372 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.