Out of the three inventions- computers, antibiotics and motor vehicles, which one do you think is the most important invention. Share your views with suitable examples and observations.
Mankind has made innumerable advances in the last century. Some of the advances which have become an indispensable part of our lives include computers, antibiotics and motor vehicles. Although all these developments have revolutionalised our lives, in my opinion, the invention of computers has a more far-reaching impact than others. This essay will discuss why computers are the most important advances made by humans.
Firstly, computers affect all walks of human lives including work and personal lives. At work, computers have made communication much easier. It is possible to send important files and documents in real time and at the click of a button. It has also increased productivity on shop floors. For instance, we use video conferencing facilities to interact with our foreign clients in our business and this saves a lot of cost and time, that would otherwise be wasted in travelling.
Additionally, computers also have immense educational and recreational value in our lives. It helps us to pursue part-time education while working through distance learning programmes. Also, kids are able to learn a great deal by reading up on various topics on the internet. Computers also help us to stay connected with our friends and families. For example, I am in constant touch with my friends settled in foreign countries through skype and zoom.
To conclude, this essay discussed how computers have touched every aspect of human life. In my opinion, computers are an indispensable part of our lives and it is difficult to imagine life without them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 60, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...numerable advances in the last century. Some of the advances which have become an indispens...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 251.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25099601594 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96287403741 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621513944223 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.5024630542 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2513115625 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.375 104.977214359 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6875 20.9669160288 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 7.25397266985 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0715925521426 0.242375264174 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0237387927575 0.0925447433944 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407519127204 0.071462118173 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0436390118256 0.151781067708 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0470273007425 0.0609392437508 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 12.6369458128 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 53.1260098522 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.3980295567 77% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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