Some people think young people should go to university to further their education while others think they should been encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc. to serve society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is commonly argued that tertiary education is the best for the youth, while some disagrees and say that they should commence working after the high school to help the society. This essay will agree that third level education is beneficial for students as well as the people in a broader way. This essay will discuss both views.
To begin with, University is the key aspect for education and it is considered that it builds the future of the nation. From this regards, the education and teaching policy of the university affect the whole nation. As a result, students will be more knowledgeable and their thinking ability would be par excellence, which would lead to a better society. The students would be exceptional in their career as well. For instance, the statistics of The Times newspaper in may 2012, showed that pupil who completed their graduation have more employment rate as compared to undergraduate.
On the other hand, many youth are not financially capable for completing their higher degree. As a result, lot of teenagers tend to takeup the skilled based job such as car mechanic etc. for supporting their families instead of joining college. For example, there was a youth named John in my area who was working as a clerk in a textile industry after finishing his high school.
To conclude, in my opinion, it is essential to complete graduation for the betterment of our career growth and also to society by providing our valuable skills and feedback for the improvement in society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...t builds the future of the nation. From this regards, the education and teaching pol...
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Line 5, column 20, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun youth seems to be countable; consider using: 'many youths'.
Suggestion: many youths
...to undergraduate. On the other hand, many youth are not financially capable for complet...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, may, so, third, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93725490196 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66308871848 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580392156863 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1448750552 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8461538462 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180110199447 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590782789125 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386287915424 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972590320417 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535297578947 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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