People are moving to urban areas from rural areas for better life. What do you think about?
The importance of people moving to urban areas for better life from rural areas was always a debatable topic. Many people state that people move to cities in order to achieve high standards of life. Others reject this notion and argue that city life is more challenging and difficult when compared to villages. In my opinion, latter proposition appears to be more rational. The following essay would further elaborate both sides with justifying reasons and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
To start with, several reasons can be drawn why people are moving to city life from village life. Firstly, for better employment and business opportunities which are less in rural areas compared to urban life. Secondly, in search of better infrastructure, health facilities and improved education for their children. For example, best education will be provided by the school educations in city which will help children coming from rural areas to learn more about discipline, communication and to create better secured future.
On the other hand, life in the cities has its drawbacks. For instance, the cost of living in cities is higher than rural areas, especially housing is very expensive. As a result, homelessness is becoming more common in cities. There are also main problems like traffic congestion and some people do not manage their work and commit crime to survive. Life in cities can be stressful and people don't have much time for themselves and their families which will result the gap between the family members.
According to the arguments aforementioned, it can be concluded that village people have to face a lot of problems when they are moving to urban areas from rural areas. In a nutshell, it can be concluded that moving to city life will be more stressful and creates more unemployment problem to the rural people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , the best
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Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, as for, as to, for example, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1207.87684729 128% => OK
No of words: 303.0 242.827586207 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09240924092 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65717357425 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551155115512 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 488.7 379.143842365 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7588699526 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4375 104.977214359 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9375 20.9669160288 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.25397266985 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388697515413 0.242375264174 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132143594455 0.0925447433944 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138787741472 0.071462118173 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2520736161 0.151781067708 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.090876940014 0.0609392437508 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 12.6369458128 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 55.0591133005 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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