People are moving to urban areas from rural areas for better life. What do you think about?
In recent years, there has been a colossal upsurge in the most significant trend to see prodigies discussing the effects of the rural-urban migration across the world, be it an impoverished or affluent nation. In this essay, I shall elaborate people move to big cities mainly in search of job opportunities and higher living standard, and this worrying trend has an adverse impact on both rural and urban communities.
At the outset, there are myriad of reasons which can be attributed to the movement. Firstly, the most conspicuous one is that a considerable number of people move to metropolises with the intention of seeking employment, due to the introduction of machinery decreased demand for the labour in the rural areas. Not only the unemployment rate increased in the agricultural sector, but residents in big cities are also gaining a broader access to public facilities and services including medical, education and transport system. For example, many young couples have chosen to migrate to big cities because they expect that their children can receive a high-quality education in urban settings. Hence, it is apparent why people will be able to improve job prospect.
However, another pivotal facet of the argument is that this movement may lead to a sharp rise in urban crime rates. The inflow of numerous migrants will create a substantial demand for housing and job opportunities in cities. Unfortunately, it is impossible to satisfy all migrants' needs within a short period of time. As a result, some migrants who are poorly-educated might end up being unemployed and living in slums with harsh conditions. In extreme cases, they may commit a crime for money and needs. Therefore, needless to say, the associated demerit of increasing population in the cities can have a far-reaching impact on the people living in the city.
To recapitulate from the aforementioned arguments, one can conclude that people, in order to find a better life, moving to the city can cause the inevitable effects which are indeed too dire to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...tisfy all migrants needs within a short period of time. As a result, some migrants who are poo...
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...iod of time. As a result, some migrants who are poorly-educated might end up being unem...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 31.9359605911 157% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 1207.87684729 143% => OK
No of words: 335.0 242.827586207 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14029850746 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 3.92707691288 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96735937374 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 139.433497537 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597014925373 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 379.143842365 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4832014037 50.4703680194 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 104.977214359 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9285714286 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.25397266985 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152801717917 0.242375264174 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447042325928 0.0925447433944 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391528100658 0.071462118173 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0922201484336 0.151781067708 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221723850713 0.0609392437508 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 55.0591133005 185% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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