Many people think regions affect successful persons. What is your opinion about native regions and accomplished person influence on the regions they belong to?
The importance of whether one's success in life depends on his or her native regions was always a debatable topic. Many people state that success of person have mere influence of the region they born. I strongly disagree with the statement that places affect the success of a person. This essay would further elaborate why I am completely against the statement with justifying reasons and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
Firstly, to accomplish anything in life required immense hard work and commitment to goals. Achieving success in life requires so many factors such as determination, dedication, clear vision of goals, ambitions, motivation and most importantly the hard work. Moreover support from family and friends also play an vital role in person journey to success. Although there is no doubt that living in a cohesive and good environment is also beneficial but the person who is more disciplined and determined to achieve his or her goals will create new ways to reach his achievements, no matter where they are.
Secondly, success in present world is earning respectable position and better secured feature. For example, people who marked themselves as examples for others have burnt the midnight oil to reach the highest position in their life. To illustrate, people like Bill Gates, APJ and the list goes with prominent leaders and personalities who are the best examples that native regions don't have any impact in their journey. From the above example, it is clear that born place will not have any influence in successful person.
According to the arguments aforementioned, one can reach out to conclusion that people belong to native region and the people who are successful have very small impact on overall success. In a nutshell, it can concluded that achieving anything in life requires his or her immense commitment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Suggestion: Moreover,
...ion and most importantly the hard work. Moreover support from family and friends also pl...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...pport from family and friends also play an vital role in person journey to success...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'conclude'
Suggestion: conclude
... overall success. In a nutshell, it can concluded that achieving anything in life require...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1207.87684729 129% => OK
No of words: 301.0 242.827586207 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16611295681 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75324897303 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584717607973 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8624730507 50.4703680194 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.071428571 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.9669160288 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.25397266985 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 6.9802955665 186% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276627649876 0.242375264174 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100056185635 0.0925447433944 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105838384173 0.071462118173 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175141759984 0.151781067708 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768649195572 0.0609392437508 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 12.6369458128 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 55.0591133005 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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