You successfully passed a job interview. You are expected to start on November 15, but you will not be available on that date. Task: Write a letter to your new boss, explaining your situation, expressing your concern and suggesting a solution.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter concerning my joining date in your organisation. I was expected to start on 15th November, but I am afraid I will not be able to start before 1st of December.
As I was admitted in hospital for a week, due to stomach infection and furthermore, took one week to recover from the weakness ; as a result of which my tasks at current job got delayed. Therefore, it is highly impossible for me to join your firm on the agreed date.
I am aware about the fact that you have taken up two new projects, considering I would be working on them. If you grant me the permission to work on weekends in your office premises, I am willing to start working from the coming weekend.
In case, it is not possible, please appoint an existing employee to take on the projects and I can takeover from him/her when I join on 1st of December.
Hope you understand my situation.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Steve Smith
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, therefore, as a result, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 803.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53672316384 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.664017458 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7473151999 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 4.34317383033 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301569124338 0.216113520407 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116343144293 0.0766984524023 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564145896927 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134163099166 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744320703406 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.