You successfully passed a job interview. You are expected to start on November 15, but you will not be available on that date. Task: Write a letter to your new boss, explaining your situation, expressing your concern and suggesting a solution.
Dear Sir,
I am writing with regards to my expected joining on 15th November. Due to an unforeseen situation I will not be able to commence work on the agreed date and will most likely be joining on 1st December.
Let me explain in details. According to the revised policy of my present company the notice period has been increased from 30 to 45 days effective from this month, in evidently delaying my joining date. My current manager failed to convey this change, resulting in my error nous joining commitment. Moreover, I am aware of the fact that, the completion of the new project solely depends on me and I need to finish it by the end of this year.
In order to do so, I would like to request for an additional resource to help carry out the work and deliver it on time. In addition, post work I would like to drop by the office for at least 2 hours daily, to get a head start on the work and my job responsibilities.
I look forward to your reply and hope you would consider my situation favorably.
Kind Regards,
Mary Smith
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- Write a letter to your friend telling him her that you have won a photography competition In your letter Describe the event Describe the photograph you have sent for the competition Invite him her to the exhibition where your photograph is presented 88
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, moreover, so, at least, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 859.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45077720207 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56363087839 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637305699482 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9370420447 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114949350482 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0429987948373 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507259028768 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0822464625068 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607437411562 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.