Many people think that regions affect successful person. What is your opinion about native region and accomplished person‟s influence on the region he belongs to?
One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is regions are affecting successful people. There is widespread worry that this will only lead to a myriad concerns in accomplished person's region they belongs to. In my opinion, this apprehension is unwarranted and thus should be rejected.
There are a number of arguments in favor of my stance but the most preponderant one is that successful people are smart enough to accomplish anything in the world. Accomplished people are not only smart and creative, but also responsible to everything in the region. It hardly needs to mention that all these merits stand in favor of accomplished people not affected by the region and other factors are in good stead as far as regions is concerned.
Another overt facet of different regions affecting successful is that people are independent of the region for their success. Besides, region play very negligible effect in people career and accomplishment and they are independent on other variables as well. Hence, it is apparent why many are against the native region effecting successful people.
In view of the arguments outlined above, one can conclude that drawbacks of regions in affecting the people accomplishment are indeed too dive to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 184, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ad to a myriad concerns in accomplished persons region they belongs to. In my opinion, ...
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Line 1, column 204, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'belong'
Suggestion: belong
...rns in accomplished persons region they belongs to. In my opinion, this apprehension is...
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Line 7, column 135, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to dive'?
Suggestion: to dive
...ng the people accomplishment are indeed too dive to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, if, so, thus, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 1207.87684729 87% => OK
No of words: 203.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18719211823 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91139256266 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 139.433497537 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 379.143842365 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5736089496 50.4703680194 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.3 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 20.9669160288 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.25397266985 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.461218272669 0.242375264174 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18505961333 0.0925447433944 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771262757351 0.071462118173 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268861487005 0.151781067708 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645817074587 0.0609392437508 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 55.0 Out of 90
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