The means of communicating in society today has changed markedly over the last ten years, in your opinion, what are the positive and negative impacts of this change?
It is incontrovertible that the ways society used to convey information and messages have evolved considerably over the last decade. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend by providing relevant arguments and examples.
On the one hand, the most striking benefits of communication advancement are that people can connect with others without distance and time barriers. To be more specific, with the existence of smartphones and the development of instant messaging, voice and video calls as well as social networking platforms; individuals can send messages and share their photos instantly, at the click of a button. For example, the number of video conferences between participants from different geographical locations conducted via Skype or Outlook has increased dramatically over the past decades, which ameliorates the ways of conducting business on international scale.
On the other hand, despite the substantial advantages of telecommunication technologies, there are some drawbacks as well. Firstly, spending excessive time on the internet tend to distract people from the real in-person interactions and decrease the time they allocate to physical activities. Another downside is potential privacy issues, prime example is Facebook, the social networking website with almost a billion users, which faced a lawsuit claiming that it has been obtaining people’s private personal information and data in order to develop political campaigns.
To recapitulate, it is unquestionable that there myriad of positive and negative influences instigated by the transformation of communication methods. Hence, people should use them more effectively and selectively in order to avoid any shortcomings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 33, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'ways'' or 'way's'?
Suggestion: ways'; way's
It is incontrovertible that the ways society used to convey information and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, so, well, for example, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 31.9359605911 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1494.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 253.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.90513833992 5.00649968141 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36119008317 2.71678728327 124% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 139.433497537 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667984189723 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.57093596059 121% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.4916794461 50.4703680194 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.4 104.977214359 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3 20.9669160288 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.25397266985 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0810019610472 0.242375264174 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0341588884093 0.0925447433944 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440956708624 0.071462118173 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0568109680125 0.151781067708 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473234369156 0.0609392437508 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 12.6369458128 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 20.72 53.1260098522 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.9458128079 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.29 11.5310837438 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.12 8.32886699507 134% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 55.0591133005 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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