Some people think that chip.
Undoubtedly, modern era has under gone dramatic changes in last few decades.presently,people have a sedentary life style.so,they prefer to send their children into play schools.however, masses is supposed to be grandparents the bes t caretaker.here,I would accord with this notion.
There are manifold points to endorse former view.first and foremost,staff who are hired for care taking.they are well trained.to be demonstrate, they have done diippomas and degrees in this field.hence,staff of play schools can mould a child into a well citizen.next,offsprings can learn various things here such as communicational skill,team spirit, virtue of sharing and so on which are fruitful for their future.children can learn from their peers while playing they can learn so many virtue of life which is unlikely to be feasible in case of grandparents because old people are not physically able to play with kids.therefore, child cares are far better option to children.by contrasting, others have conflicting view.
They opime that,if kids spend time with grandparents, then it will not only productive for children,but also better for grandparents because grandparents feel loneliness with kids. According to a recent sarvey 60 % female say their child are safe when they live with their family members. Also,senior citizen are the great source of knowledge for kids because they come across many aspects I'm their life .they can teach to juvenile to about their culture and tradition moreover,if children spend time with their grandparents, them they can become the sensior and no generation gap left between family member.
To conclude,although play schools are beat for children.but we should not under estimate the value of grandparents. They can also become a well child taker if they get a chance l.
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- Some people believe that young people should have university education this will bring benifiy to society others believe that it will lead to graduate unemployment discus both view and give opinion 67
- Some people think that children centres provide the best services for children play school age other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better cares for their kids 67
- Some people believe that young people should have university education this will 67
- Some people say that fashion effects ourl live in a negative way other say that it has more positive effect on our lives 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: undergone
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45161290323 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.56759615805 2.80592935109 127% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620071684588 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 210.370033561 49.4020404114 426% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 217.285714286 106.682146367 204% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.8571428571 20.7667163134 192% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7142857143 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0206292068395 0.244688304435 8% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00942380207325 0.084324248473 11% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0160505116885 0.0667982634062 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0164916536282 0.151304729494 11% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182831222668 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.2 13.0946893788 185% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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