Nowadays many business meetings and trainings are happenings online not in real office
Working style has gone dramatic changes in least few decades.presently,these days meetings are holding on mass Media instead of offices.This tendency has too many merits. Here I would accounts for both pros and cons of the happening.
There are manifold points to endorse former view.first and for most,arranging meetings online not only saves our money,but also savesour precious time. To justify, it is often seem that people who go to office spend too much time while travelling.The tendency of doing meetings and trainings online can save their some time.Moreover,people use vehicle for going into office which leads toward a lot of pollution because vehicle emit excessive amount of smoke.owing to this,environment can be contaminated.next,arranging meetings into office must be required official or rental building which need major chunk of money for establishing buildings. Thus,masses will not have to spend excessive money on this things.hence,this supposed to be a excellent approach.
Although it has some drawbacks too.To commence with,attending meetings online can be destructive for people's health. To elaborate, people have to devote too much time in computer ,mobile and so on in order to attend meetings the silver screen of Mobile and computer emit detrimental rays which can leave profound effect on eyes. I'm addition, there is good ambience require in order to arrange meetings. Anyone can not proper explain the task to their employees because it needs emotion and feelings. Thence it seems good for nothing.
To conclude although,doing meetings and trainings have too many benifits.however,demerits of this can not be neglected. In my opinion meetings and trains must be arranged according to work place.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the least'.
Suggestion: in the least
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Suggestion: This
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Suggestion: account
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, thus, while, as to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51127819549 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.66983538948 2.80592935109 131% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624060150376 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 115.655619069 49.4020404114 234% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 122.166666667 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172673986656 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581500857847 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572396684615 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110620408295 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508090089471 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.