Nowadays buy more and more things things which are unnecessary why it so happening
Lifestyle has undergone dramatic changes over a coupe of decades. Presently, the tendency of buying new goods are gaining prevelance . so, people buy things which a are unnecessary.
Hence,it supposed to be perilous. Here, I would accounts for this happening and it's demerits.
There are manifold causes of happening this. First and foremost, it is the ear of competitiveness. Several companies are competing to each other. So, they are providing concession on consumer goods. people are allure to buy them and buy products which are useless. Taking a real life example into consideration,people buy set of soaps even they require not all. Morover, these days products advertising by film stars or celebrity and packaging of goods are excellent which allure people and compel to buy unnecessary goods. Next, people buy innovative product for show-off.To justify, living standard of people are uplift. So, folks buy products for elevation their personality in society. Thus, such tendency compel people to buy goods.
This trend is perilous for society. To commence with, the tendency of buying more and more products make people to is spendthrift. Thus, they have to work more than their stipulated hours which can the cause of destructive maladies. In addition to this, using the goods in excessive amount can be responsible to the consumerism. To justify, people buy innovative product and through the old ones which can contaminate the environment. Therefore, this trend has too many cons.
To concclude, this happening has negative result even we can not be totally eliminated from society, it can be curbed up to some extent if we serious regard this happening.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, as to, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27715355805 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93824033958 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580524344569 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8700252282 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.0454545455 106.682146367 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.1363636364 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.59090909091 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 14.0 3.4128256513 410% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238494179321 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691991481961 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872134723683 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115803903006 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734451133906 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 9.78957915832 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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