Is important for public money to be spent on promoting healthy lifestyle to prevent illness than spending money treating people who are ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Being healthy is more essential than other things in every one’s life. If individual is strong, consequently the nation will be strong. It is government responsibility to give awareness on being healthy, to do this, government should spend some on advertisement. I strongly agree to this statement, because it has several advantages.
Firstly, preventing causes and factors of illness is best idea than giving treatment later. To explain, so many citizens don’t know the exact reasons and factors of illness, if government is able to promote about it, that will help to people to take precautions. For example, If give suggestions on how to stop mosquito and insect population as well as how to make clean surroundings , then people could prevent diseases at beginning such as malaria and dengue fever. This of advertisements and promotions save the lot of money of people by avoiding hospitals.
Secondly, a lot of diseases are propagating in metro and developed cities due to bad good habits and lack of exercise. Usually, most of people who live in cities spend more time at work so they don’t get enough time to cook and workout, as a result they face many health problems such obesity, stress and heart issues. To prevent this, organizations or companies should provide healthy environment and promote healthy habits to their employees such as providing gyms and healthy food courts. For instance, The Google company is arranging great healthy environment for employees and promoting sports, as well as giving healthy food without charge.
To sum up, promotions and motivations definately bring changes into people and it is best approch to prevanting the diseases. Moreover, it will save lot of money of people and government by decreasing the people who take treament to sick. Due to this, nation will become bery strong and healthy consequenlty development is possible.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 51, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...reventing causes and factors of illness is best idea than giving treatment later. To ex...
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Line 3, column 389, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s well as how to make clean surroundings , then people could prevent diseases at b...
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Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...d habits and lack of exercise. Usually, most of people who live in cities spend more time at w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2393442623 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90732149275 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583606557377 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2887035216 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.533333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.86666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244988850025 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755537818772 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444439912308 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136718718958 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0185265720603 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.