Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole.
Discuss this view and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
The choice of when, how and what to eat is largely dependent on religion, culture, wealth, health and a few other things. Although, many don’t consciously make such decisions themselves, but rather grow up in family and just follow suit with the diet type, while many other decide what type of food they eat. This therefore, as resulted in different eating habit with some deciding against eating fish and/or meat of any kind (this set of people are otherwise known as vegetarian). For me, whatever choice an individual makes, shouldn’t be anybody’s headache, so long it please him.
There are benefits of being a Vegetarian, so also is eating meat and/or fish. Some have chosen to be vegetarian considering the health benefits and also the impact on our global climate, and some others have chosen not to eat meat because they are sympathetic with the animal family, which we all belong, in one way or the other (In fact science as it on record that we are higher animal), whereas other decided to be a vegetarian as a result of religion or set of believes. For whatever reason an individual considered genuine for his decision should be well respected by all and sundry.
On the other hand, people who consume fish and/or meat as part of their meal, as given reasons to include, the fact that it allows for variety; there are different types of meat and/or fish to choose from, each one boasting different taste and flavour. Also is the fact that meat and/or fish is one of the highest form of protein, which is necessary for a balanced diet, suggesting that meat consumption is not any bad, even though too much of it may pose some health challenges.
Finally, it will be out of place, to judge any group (i.e. meat and/or fish eaters against vegetarians) on moral grounds. I therefore would be of the opinion that whatever anyone chooses to do, should be done with all modesty, while remembering that we have all got one time to live.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 585, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pleases'?
Suggestion: pleases
... be anybody's headache, so long it please him. There are benefits of being a V...
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Line 5, column 254, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...e boasting different taste and flavour. Also is the fact that meat and/or fish is on...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, in fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73900293255 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53716368067 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554252199413 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.6449522811 49.4020404114 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.909090909 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 20.7667163134 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224652712677 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0960000537325 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601477650213 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136706726253 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495676191889 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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