You bought a TV a week ago but when you got home you discovered it did not work properly... You called the customer service to report the problem you have not yet received any help.
Write a letter to the company and in your letter:
1. Introduce yourself
2. Explain the problem
3. And state what action you would like from the company
Write not less than 150 words
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to let you know that the Sunny TV flat screen, fifty-two inches I bought last week Tuesday from your store outlet in Down Town Road is not functioning properly. I called the customer service immediately when the problem started but I am still to see any action.
Let me explain the problem in details. The TV was in good condition when I bought it but to my despair when I got home everything have changed. Firstly, it was the image quality which became very blurry then later the power switched off and after two minutes on automatically. I immediately informed the customer service about the TV issues and they assured me they would send a technician right away but four days have passed and no one has come to fix it.
I am exceedingly displeased with both the quality of the product I purchased from your company and the poor service I have received since. I hope this problem would be resolved promptly. Could you please send a repairer to come over and repair it and if it is not possible then you replace the TV with a brand new since it has two years warranty.
Thanks for your understanding and cooperation.
Yours faithfully,
Martin Oben.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 140, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...the poor service I have received since. I hope this problem would be resolved pro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, still, then, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 990.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64788732394 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58117779029 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638497652582 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.3888506652 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283209942177 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082511647012 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614192618018 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14452391865 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798991717479 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.