As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
The technology nowadays have made it easy for humans to solve any type of problem. Over the period of time the technology have enabled the humans to think critically and in more advanced way. People began to take challenges in all the field and tried to solve the problem with the help of available technology available in the particular field. It was possible to bring the revolution in the internet because of growing research in the field of technology. The evolution of the internet is the best example how technology has helped human and as a result of this the internet in turn is hoping humans in their ever demanding needs. As the people are getting more and more involved in tech they are getting more and more curious on how things are working and this is enabling people to think and understand the critical parts and the crucial parts.
The internet is the best example of how technology is helping people. Over the period of time the people started understanding the advantage of connecting the world through a common platform. As a result of which there were enemies improvements in the field of technology and data communication and it finally led to the invention of the great internet. It is helping human knowing how things are working around the globe by sitting at home. The one who knows about something can put a great explanation with example over the internet while the other who does’t know can find the answer over the internet.
The other great advantage of this growing technology is that it helping people think on how to automate the things which requires manual operation. In this advancement people are thinking of the ways in which we can enable automating of the task. Even though automating things can make human somewhat lazy but in order to keep the things working humans have to work hard on keep learning new ways and enable the new automation techniques.
The advancement in technology is attracting humans and people are trying to understand things in order to innovate something new in the tech. It is creating a massive competition as a result of which every one is trying hard to think critically so that they can out stand this growing competition. The new trends in the technology has also created a great demand and ignorer to supply that the opportunities for people to work is also increasing and also the decision making power of the people is increasing. As technology allows people to create their own things and cultivate their own ideas, people are deliberately working on thinking of new ideas which can lead to new innovation for the betterment of the society.
I would like to conclude that, it may look like more and more technology may limit the thinking ability of humans but actually it is creating more and more opportunities for humans to think. The great demand of new technology and growing opportunities has created a great competition in the field of technology, as a result of which people are coming up with great innovative ideas and which is leading to great innovation for the betterment of the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... to solve any type of problem. Over the period of time the technology have enabled the humans ...
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Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... technology is helping people. Over the period of time the people started understanding the ad...
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Line 7, column 179, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ch. It is creating a massive competition as a result of which every one is trying...
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Line 7, column 673, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'innovation'.
Suggestion: innovation
...thinking of new ideas which can lead to new innovation for the betterment of the society. I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, look, may, so, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 82.0 58.6224719101 140% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2562.0 2235.4752809 115% => OK
No of words: 531.0 442.535393258 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82485875706 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80035803286 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68728793598 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.378531073446 0.4932671777 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 816.3 704.065955056 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.6210430552 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.1 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.55 23.4991977007 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15 5.21951772744 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298452336643 0.243740707755 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102112603699 0.0831039109588 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0956323052052 0.0758088955206 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185041935458 0.150359130593 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108309712566 0.0667264976115 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.1639044944 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.