You recently recieved a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job.You think he/she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend.In your letter
-say why he/she would not enjoy going to college
-explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
-suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear Mike,
I hope you're doing well, its great to finally hear back from you! Its been quite awhile since our last trip to England! We shared great memories together, and I hope that we could make another trip soon.
On your previous letter, you seem confused between choosing a job or going after college.I personally feel that college prepares you for an academic-based career and doesn't cater towards the current needs of the job market.You'd also be stuck in debt after graduation which could mean that you will end up paying that amount with interest.
Having a job after high school in fields such as Construction, Auto body, Plumbing, and Maintenance can be quite rewarding since the requirements to earn a certification is minimal with an on-the-job training focus.You could even end up owning your own business and gaining good relations with your customers by gaining referrals over time.
It's always better be self-employed and gain knowledge at a young age than waste time over a college degree,I hope to hear back from you
Warm wishes,
Jack Davis
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Dear Mike, I hope youre doing well, its great to finally hear b...
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Suggestion: I
...n choosing a job or going after college.I personally feel that college prepares y...
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...es you for an academic-based career and doesnt cater towards the current needs of the ...
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...rds the current needs of the job market.Youd also be stuck in debt after graduation ...
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...rds the current needs of the job market.Youd also be stuck in debt after graduation ...
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Suggestion: You
...nimal with an on-the-job training focus.You could even end up owning your own busin...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...mers by gaining referrals over time. Its always better be self-employed and gain...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...ge than waste time over a college degree,I hope to hear back from you Warm wish...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, so, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03910614525 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61386851326 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.715083798883 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6804123711 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 16.3608247423 269% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.2528687985 44.8134815571 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 225.5 76.5299724578 295% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.75 16.8248392259 266% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.75 4.34317383033 248% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164793969802 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928077559109 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591425962445 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945776102695 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582725620152 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.7 8.37731958763 295% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 35.28 70.7449484536 50% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 7.45979381443 259% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.84 8.71597938144 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 7.59969072165 124% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.6 8.54432989691 229% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 20.0 8.15463917526 245% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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