Prison is the only truly effective form of punishment, because it separates criminalsfrom society. To what extent you agree or disagree.
Imprisonment is often viewed as the best possible way to punish the criminal as it confines them inside the four walls away from the family member and society. In my opinion, it is one of the ways to teach them a lesson for their wrongdoing, however the outcome of punishment linked with effective rehabilitation program that will reduce the chance of re-offense by them.
Criminals get sentences according to nature of the crime. It is perceived that this separation from community and family help reconciliation. They feel sorry for what they have done and that is the motivation to come back in normal life after release from jail. However, there are unanticipated things that happen inside the prison which many change the course of the correction process. For example, petty criminals are influenced by other inmates who were involved serious crime to join with their groups outside the jail after being released. Many of them do want a return to their family rather they involved with other criminal groups for their livehood. In most countries there is no effective rehabilitation program for the inmate during the period they stay inside the jail. Lack of recreational activities, availability of drugs, poor sanitation, and congested living condition give them a sense of abandoned by society and family members while serving their sentences.
Keeping them in a well-secured place will not bring any substantial change in their mindset unless they are tied to a rehabilitation program. Each inmate should be assessed psychologically initially and periodically to figure out any change of their attitude towards crime and normal life. An educational program for example online education for the prisoners is important as it will help them to find a job after release. Vocational program such as tailoring and cooking course enable them to live in the society independently. Immediately after release, they need social support like housing, debt management, and job opportunity. Federal and provincial government play a greater role in funding to achieve this goal.
In conclusion, no individuals born as criminal and criminals deserve respect and kindness too. Imprisonment will keep them away from society but the likelihood of successful rehabilitation largely depend on the collaborative action of the state, community and family members.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 338, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun change seems to be countable; consider using: 'many changes'.
Suggestion: many changes
...ngs that happen inside the prison which many change the course of the correction process. F...
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Line 4, column 385, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help them find' instead.
Suggestion: help them find
...r the prisoners is important as it will help them to find a job after release. Vocational program...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1985.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 372.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33602150538 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95278660292 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572580645161 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 639.0 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3603563795 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.277777778 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72222222222 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.038832137118 0.244688304435 16% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0134556644727 0.084324248473 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0174104214611 0.0667982634062 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0227086459877 0.151304729494 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171644927081 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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