Some People believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviors.Others disagree and think that host country should welcome cultural differences? Discuss both the views and provide your opinion.
Every country and its people have their own culture and customs, some of them are being exercised as norms/practices while others become laws. Accordingly, some people are of the view that everyone, whether a citizen or a tourist should follow the customs of a country wholeheartedly; while others believe that every country should respect diversification in cultures.
Generally people do follow the customs and norms of a country while touring, which in my view is the way to go. This adaptation of culture creates harmony and avoids any possibility of conflicts. This behavior also provide tourists with an opportunity to see and enjoy different cultures as they travel to different places and provide them with a chance to diverse exposure.
However, the counter argument to this view of adaptation is also a very strong one to some extent, as they say that the host country should welcome the cultural diversity. In their view, if a country adapts and keep itself open to new cultures, this will benefit the host country economically as well as culturally. The flexibility shown by the host nation will attract more and more tourism and this will enhance its economic activity.
Although both the views have pretty strong arguments to stand with.One says to create harmony and to give exposure of new cultures tourists should adapt customs of the visiting country. While on the other hand if host country adapts to the culture of touring people; this will attract more economic activity. However; in my view tourist must follow and adapt to the customs, norms and laws of the touring country and abide them completely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, however, if, so, well, while, as well as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07063197026 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66940384575 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501858736059 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.300896565 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354290915427 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144848024954 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0910186121522 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230877108504 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638427342695 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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