The mass media, including television, radio and newspapers, have great influence in shaping people's ideas.
Mass media has been playing a significant role in our society in pursuit of shaping or distorting people's ideas. It may be used for the purpose brainwashing people's ideas in some drastic countries. However, as far as I am concerned, I would take a position in favour of positive aspects as to influence on people's ideas.
To commence with negative effects of it, first and foremost, it could be used for the purpose of maintenance of dictatorship. North Korea, for example, has been distorting mass media to brainwash the people's thoughts with respect to superiority of communism. From this perspective, media have abilities which change the false to the truth. Another example is that some North Korean people still believe that South Korea is subject to the USA. This is the way they maintain the presidency by distorting and controlling people's ideas.
In an attempt to add up some more examples of good phases, people have a tendency that their thoughts are always the best. As regards to misunderstanding, mass media has an enormous sense of responsibility that they have to fix it.
For example, let us say this is a bad thing and people are not aware of its detrimental effects at all. Mass media have a power that can fix people's thoughts which are known as prejudice. In this manner, mass media can help people distinguish what justice is.
To sum up, mass media is sometimes deemed to be way too influential. As far as I am concerned, I agree that mass media have huge impact on forming people's thoughts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, still, as regards, as to, for example, to sum up, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1263.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82061068702 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80457485445 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545801526718 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.6518588321 49.4020404114 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.2 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302357271467 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110637779078 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645942746911 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18167975989 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333256979804 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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